Tuesday, 12 June 2012

My own version of Goldie locks and three bears.

Once there was a little girl and her name was Goldie locks. One day she was walking in the forest then she saw a house. She ran to the house because she could smell porridge. She went in, then the door shut, just like a haunted house. She heard a voice and said “Is there anybody here?” Then she heard a voice coming from upstairs saying “hello is that you honey?” Goldie locks asked “who’s that?” The voice replied “it's your husband”. Then a ghost came down the stairs and frightened Goldie Locks, she was so scared that she lost her hair and thats how she got the name boldie locks.

Boldie Locks likes to play at the park and loves playing with her toys.  She really likes playing with her teddy bears.  She has a best friend called Little Miss Muffit and they play on the playground together.  Boldie Locks can’t wait to grow her hair back because she doesn’t like people teasing her. Her favourite color is blue and when she grows up she wants to be a singer and dreams of being a Superstar!


  1. Hi Hannah im back for the weekend because my brother has got cancer and his HAIR is starting to fall OUT so im going to be up here every weekend and we hope hes going to get better.
    from Mia Jarman
    my granny known as Mrs Jarman says that you were really good at netball!

  2. Hi Hannah,
    Awesome work! I really like your version of Goldie Locks. My favourite part is when Goldie Locks lost her hair and became Boldie Locks. Your writing was so good, I couldn't think of anything to help you improve it. Keep up the awesome work Hannah!