Monday, 4 November 2013

My Narrative!

Once upon a time there was a little girl and her name was Ana. Ana was born on July the 6th 1994. She was so lovely she would always help everyone with anything they needed help with. On September the 23rd 2001 she had died because she had cancer.

Her mum had another baby on the 2nd of July 2011 and her name was Sela. Sela was beautiful and kind just like her older sister. But the only thing was Sela didn't know she had a older sister.

But one late night Sela was in bed comfortable and warm, until she heard a voice that sounded like a doll. The voice was saying “ Hi Sela my name is Ana and I am your older sister” Then the voice was repeating that over and over again, Sela looked around her but no one was there it was only her.

Then the voice stopped. There was a little silence at first . But Sela was thinking about what the voice was saying and then shouted “Wait! So that means I have an older sister?” Then the voice said “Yes” As soon as the voice said that Sela jumped in the air. Then Sela asked the voice “Then......where is she?” When the voice heard that question she sighed and said “ shes...shes in heaven” When the voice said that she was sad and all you heard was a swish out of the window. Sela didn't get it.

So the next morning Sela ran up to her mum and asked her “Who’s Ana?” The mum was shocked. She didn't know what to say so then she was telling Sela the story about her older sister and how she died from cancer. When the mum finished her story she asked Sela “How do you know Ana?” Sela replied “We just had a little talk”


1 comment:

  1. Cool Story Hannah. I really liked how it was short but good. Nice names...... (I'm Ana) Was this your Test Writing and if it was did you edit it afterwards for your blog?

    Ana V