Friday 4 May 2012

My story about the swimming pools.


One lovely morning on a summers day, we went to the swimming pool just for a day.
To the YMCA pools my favourite place, I went in with a great big smile on my face.
Getting into my togs I looked just like a frog.

When I went into the pool I had some time off school.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Hannah,

    That was an amazing story.
    You have used heaps of topic words.

    KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK HANNAH!!!!!!

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  2. Hi Hannah,
    That was an amazing work you did by your self the thing I
    like about your story is you got good words in your story.


    Keep up he good work hannah.

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